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Friday, 22 June 2012

Script For Film Noir ; Killer Romance (Barrington)

Chelsea – ex girlfriend
Leah – (jay’s sister)
Taylor – the new current girlfriend
Taylor’s Dad/Police officer.
Jay – boyfriend

Scene 11; Can be shot in hall way off college.
Its Scene One Jay and Chelsea are in school arguing about there relationship.
Jay; cant keep doing this with you
Chelsea; What? You breaking up with me? FINE! you aint all that anyway
Jay; (laugh’s) that’s why you can’t stand me hanging out with other girls
Cheslea – oh shut you faggot, you can’t find someone like me
Jay – that’s the whole point and I found someone better , way better then you.
They walk off there seprate ways.

Second scene,Jay goes home from school and leahs at home my mums out.
Leah(jays sister); dad called but I just let it ring thought you would want to answer it instead
Jay; (jay walks towards the couch drops his bags and watches TV) Leah you going to have to talk to him one day
Leah; yeah that’s my choice when (Leah walks to go sit next to him)
Jay; (hugs leah)
Leah; how was your day anyway
Jay; broke up with Chelsea she was a right bitch, if only you were there.
Leah; Aww for real I’m sorry why she was such a bitch? Goes to the kitchen and pores him a drink
Jay; she so controlling bun being with her when she like that. (Taking sips off the drink) but I found this other girl Leah think she maybe be the one.

Leah; don’t you think you should come down a bit with this relationship thing not really wise, you got to think about you’re a level’s and that you can being focusing on getting us out of here by flirting with other girls jay

Jay; I’m trying, I’m trying but I still young and I promise ill look after you and I know I haven’t been around a lot and that but things will change hey!! Maybe I can invite that girl round with us one day and go out all three off us for a meal , by the way her names Taylor she’s really sweet she reminds me of you when we was growing up in the funny way and just being amazing like my little sister.

Leah; Yeah yeah (eyes rolling like) she don’t lose sight of what matters jay , (gets up walks off and says under her breath) only me he needs.

Next scene will between jay and Taylor. – scene 3


Taylor; hi jay
Jay; oh hey Taylor you alright
Taylor; yeah I’m fine how you?
Jay; I’m good thank you
Taylor; good good
Awkward moment of silence
Jay/Taylor; would you like to
Jay; please go sorry for interrupting you
Taylor; want to go out for a coffee with me or something?
Jay; I would love to.
Taylor; well I’m off to class see you later?
Jay; yeah what’s your number so we can set up a date to go?
Taylor; oh yeah (gives her number to him ) , just text me and I’ll save your number
Jay; I will do see you later?
Taylor; yeah bye. (smiles cross both and go)

scene 4 - the murders start happening around the city, the murder’s all connect to a jay

Taylor’s dad/police officer; how was your day tay?
Taylor; it was great dad, how was work?
Taylor’s dad; Crazy, there are these girls getting killed these past months and I can’t find the connection between them expect they went t to the same school but I want you to be careful out there and if you’re going to be out till late I want to know where and who with so your old man can have a some closer sure off knowing where you are.
Taylor – yeah I will dad and I always got my kick ass moves that I learnt
Taylor’s dad – that’s my girl.
Next Scène – scene 5
(Leah is in her room close up shot on her face no diogale but her thoughts will be heard out loud)
Leah’s Thought’s; ahh Chelsea on holiday Fuck how am I going to get to her now, (throws books at her bedroom wall).
Jay; (walks pasts goes to her room) whats wrong with you?
Leah; nothing just looking out for you
Jay; huh (puzzled face) what you talking about leah?
Leah; what you want to eat that’s what I mean (smiley face)
Jay; oh oh anything please (grin teeth)
Leahs faces is just blank too focused on something else.
Scene 5;
Jay; (texts taylor) hey you want to come out for that date then?
‘Camera on phone’ then switch to taylor.
Close up to Taylor’s phone then close up on her facee;
Taylor; yeah I cant wait, boring just seeing you in school eyes are always on you now I can get to know you.
Jay’s just keep typing.
Next Scene’s the date. 

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